essay for Garcia.
Garcia is a good admiral of America, government want give him a letter very emergency, so they fond Rowen a young person who can find Garcia, when he left, he didn't ask where is Garcia, we need learn some thing from Rowen, The man who obeys the command can be successful. Don't ask too much, just do it whole-heartedly. Like Rowan.Don't perfunctory, often the last person to stay is not a lazy person, is someone really good! like this book says "How can you expect them to serve others if they can't be spontaneous?"
1.don't be lazy, i need finish my homework first, then i can play some video games, i cannot fall in sleep when i study.never get up late.
2.be more friendly, in China, we say more friends, more ways to success, so if i want more friends, i need friendly to everybody.
3.write more notes about the classes. nobody can renmeber all things that teacher says, so notes are very important.
4.be nice to your parent, if you always make a war with you parent, i don't think we can be good at study!
5.enthusiasm, Be enthusiastic about everything, you will have a good feeling!
Carl, you have done a good job writing the summary of "A Message to Garcia." You understand the purpose of the essay. You have earned an A, but not a perfect score, since we still have some work to do to improve your English writing skills. I will be happy to meet with you any time you want if you want extra help. 46/50 is your grade on this essay. You Action Plan is very good and makes a lot of sense. It is good advice, not only for you, but for all freshmen everywhere! Please pay attention to the capital letters, and write your blog like it is more formal, not like you are sending a text. 48/50 on the Action Plan, giving you a total of 94/100 on the entire assignment.
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